above the wood you sit ,eyes closed. moionless forging dreams, between your hocked head and feet.bettween the highest tree’s the air meets with the sun, between the mountains.your feet lock into the rought bark. When you sore above the sky You scan for pray
May 14, 2013 at 4:20 pm
Adam, this is an effective shift into the second person – nicely done.
In the assessment you will have to make sure your spelling and grammar is accurate too. This will be an important focus for you to make sure you get the best marks.
Mr Waugh